Media studies script
(Girl walking home from school after staying behind doing work, she walks through the alley and the park, this will be filmed using tracking shots varying from medium to long tracking shot)
(The girl calls her mum, this will be shown through a close up and medium shot)
Cath: Hi mum, how are you? I’ve just finished revising and I’m on my way home.
Mum: Good darling, your father and I will be near the school soon would you like picking up?
Cath: No it’s fine, I may pop into Georgia’s on the way home to drop her textbook and oyster round.
Mum: Are you sure? It’s getting dark, I will drop you at Georgia’s and pick you up later.
Cath: Mum, seriously, I am 17.
Mum: I know you are 17 but it is dark and there are weirdos at this time of night.
Cath: Oh my God, you always get so paranoid and worried about me. Just let me get the bloody train, it’s not a big deal.
Mum: It’s not you that I don’t trust it’s the people around you.
Cath: Okay mum. (Angrily she hangs up the phone, this is shown in a close up shot)
(She goes down a dark alley way. This is shown through a medium and long shot)
(She’s walking through the alley listening to music contemplating life, she notices a dark like figure standing in the distance, and the figure slowly walks over to a bench and sits on it. The camera will track her during her walk)
(Cath keeps on walking thinking nothing of it)
(Cath pauses her music shown through match and action editing techniques and as anyone would do when they are slightly anxious she called her friend. This is shown from and a close up and an extreme close up showing her emotion)
(She her best friend Ciara but she did not pick up, frustrated, she calls her other best friend Emma)
(Emma picks up)
Emma: Hiya, what's up?
Cath: Nothing really, just walking too the station and walking through the alley. I actually hate the dark not going to lie.
Emma: Aw, same.
(general conversation about school and exams)
Cath: (talking to Emma) I think I should've just got my mum to pick me up, its actually so cold and too dark for my liking.
Emma: Oh Cath, you'll be fine. Its just the dark - it's the exactly the same place as normal just you can't see as much. That's what I think of when I walk in the dark.
(Anxiously, Cath looks behind to just see if anyone is around)
(Due to there being no light she couldn't see from at least 6 metres away. She picks up the pace of her walking because she has a general feeling that someone is lurking behind her)
Cath: Oh my God, someone just whistled at me!
(No reaction from Emma, Cath gets very scared and anxious, even more than before)
Cath: Emma? are you there?
(The signal cuts out but the time it reconnects Cath is in serious trouble)
Emma: Cath? Cath?
(Cath's heavy breathing and crying in the back ground)
Man: I've got her now, its your turn to do the finding.
(The man throws the phone) it will be filmed using
tracking shots varying from medium to long tracking shot).
Script Evaluation
We found during filming that our script was too long and too time consuming of our 2 minutes of film for our opening, also due to other commitments the actor playing Emma was unavailable most days of filming therefore we decided to alter our script and get rid of the character Emma and focus on the conversation with Cath and her mother as we feel this would connect more with the audience as a teenage girl's mother showing her care and concern for the young girl as she is walking home alone. therefore the script in red is our original and our second script is our re-evaluated script.
(She her best friend Ciara but she did not pick up, frustrated, she calls her other best friend Em
Script 2; Altered Due To Timing Issues
(The girl calls her mum, this will be shown through a close
up and medium shot) Cath: Hi mum, how
are you? I’ve just finished revising and I’m on my way home
Mum: Good darling, your father and I will be near the school
soon would you like picking up?
Cath: No it’s fine, I may pop into Georgia’s on the way home
to drop her textbook and oyster round.
Mum: Are you sure? It’s getting dark, I will drop you at
Georgia’s and pick you up later.
Cath: Mum, seriously, I am 17.
Mum: I know you are 17 but it is dark and there are weirdos
at this time of night.
Cath: Oh my God, you always get so paranoid and worried
about me. Just let me get the bloody train, it’s not a big deal.
Mum: It’s not you that I don’t trust it’s the people around
you.
Cath: Okay mum. (Angrily she hangs up the phone, this is
shown in a close up shot)
(She goes down a dark alley way that is dark at the other
end. This is shwon through a medium and long shot)
(She’s walking through the alley listening to music
contemplating life, she notices a dark like figure standing in the distance,
and the figure slowly walks over to a bench and sits on it. The camera will
track her during her walk)
(Cath keeps on walking thinking nothing of it)
(Cath pauses her music shown through match and action
editing techniques and as anyone would do when they are slightly anxious she
called her friend. This is shown from and a close up and an extreme close up
showing her emotion)
(Caths heavy breathing and crying in the back ground)
Man: Ive got her now, its your turn to do the finding.
(The man throws the phone)